Paragraph Flow And Reverse Outline
Objective
Check whether a section is easy to follow from a reader's perspective before polishing sentence style.
Paragraph Test
For each paragraph, answer:
- What is the one message of this paragraph?
- Does the first sentence state or clearly prepare that message?
- Does every sentence connect to the previous sentence by cause, contrast, consequence, refinement, or example?
- Are key nouns and technical terms defined before reuse?
- Does the paragraph connect back to the section objective?
Reverse Outline
Build a compact reverse outline:
text
Section objective:
P1 topic sentence -> evidence/explanation -> role
P2 topic sentence -> evidence/explanation -> role
P3 topic sentence -> evidence/explanation -> roleFlag any paragraph whose topic sentence does not map to the section objective, or whose evidence does not map to the topic sentence.
Transition Diagnosis
Use explicit relation labels before suggesting words:
| Relation | Use When | Typical Signal |
|---|---|---|
| cause | next sentence explains why | because, due to, therefore |
| contrast | next sentence limits or opposes | however, in contrast |
| consequence | next sentence states result | consequently, as a result |
| refinement | next sentence narrows meaning | specifically, in particular |
| example | next sentence grounds a claim | for example, e.g. |
Do not add transitions that fake logic. If the relation is missing, propose a bridging sentence or reorder paragraphs.